Chapter 5 Page 17

posted 12th Apr 2013, 12:15 AM

Chapter 5 Page 17
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12th Apr 2013, 12:15 AM

CrackaWindow

Whoa, look! Color! My gift to you guys for being extremely late. But uh, I don't really know how many updates I'll be doing during April, due to the 30 day character design challenge. So I'll try to get a few more out, but it will be irregular. Sorry for the inconvenience!

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12th Apr 2013, 8:58 AM

Draginbeard

Yea color! That landscape is very dreamy!

In the last panel, I see the water level is rising, but I am wondering is Almond being pulled in, or did he fall?

The background and sound effect seem to show him landing back into the water.

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12th Apr 2013, 10:39 AM

CrackaWindow

He's being pulled under, which might seem odd because the water appears so shallow. So it might be a little hard to read, I dunno. But it's supposed to be a little weird.

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12th Apr 2013, 10:49 AM

Draginbeard

Gotcha, its just the 'Ker Plunk' effect that made me wonder. That's the sound I associate with something being dropped into water. And the background suggests he is closer to a wall now.

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12th Apr 2013, 10:54 AM

CrackaWindow

I probably should have gone with a "splash" effect... But ker plunk is so much fun.

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12th Apr 2013, 4:43 PM

TheOneBlueGecko

Mysterious dream visions...

I do love the color, all a bit off from reality, but totally cool.

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12th Apr 2013, 10:53 PM

CrackaWindow

You know all about those, don't you? :p

Yeah, I was trying to go for something a little surreal and empty-feeling. Trying to capture that Dali feeling.

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